I want to write a personal article for the German news website nachdenkseiten.org - They asked for expert recommendations regarding the Windows 10 privacy disaster.
Would somebody want to help me and review it? https://gist.github.com/thkoch2001/d1bb1946804004d3f1d9
If you like, you can also make it an official article of the debian project and I withdraw mine. But I think it would be good to send it this week.
Thank you,
Thomas Koch
CC to FSFE, if somebody has an time for a review.
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Hallo Thomas,
klingt so ganz gut, nur den vorletzten Satz würde ich etwas anpassen: s/voller (Terminkalender)/trotz seines vollen \1s/ Der fällt vom Schreibstil etwas aus der Reihe.
Für tiefere Gedankengänge über die Verständlichkeit für die Allgemeinheit oder sowas bin ich aber schon zu müde.
Gruß, Florian
Am 19. August 2015 19:23:07 MESZ, schrieb Thomas Koch thomas@koch.ro:
I want to write a personal article for the German news website nachdenkseiten.org - They asked for expert recommendations regarding the Windows 10 privacy disaster.
Would somebody want to help me and review it? https://gist.github.com/thkoch2001/d1bb1946804004d3f1d9
If you like, you can also make it an official article of the debian project and I withdraw mine. But I think it would be good to send it this week.
Thank you,
Thomas Koch
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