Hi,
Unesco just published the draft document we all contributed to produce http://www.unesco.org/webworld/portal_freesoft/license_info.shtml.
Comments, criticisms, fixes are very welcome. Although this text is much better than the previous one, it still need peer-reviewing to mature.
The source of the document is at
http://france.fsfeurope.org/drafts/license-info.html
Enjoy,